咨询时间 8:00~24:00

400-100-0918

当前位置: 首页 资讯中心 汇总雅思口语批改问题
汇总雅思口语批改问题
资讯 · 2018-09-06 11:26:27 浏览量 · 217
说到雅思口语备考,考生们除了每天的口语话题训练,最有效的方法是找个靠谱的人给你的雅思口语话题进行一次深度的雅思口语批改,直击灵魂,直击问题。启德考培小编本期就为大家整理一波雅思口语批改中出现的常见的问题。

  究竟如何才能改变雅思口语万能5.5分的诅咒?好吧,小编觉得,直击痛点的备考方法才是好方法,比如雅思口语批改。启德考培小编就集中整理了一波雅思口语批改中发现的问题,备考过程中,能够第一时间暴露自己的问题,并及时纠正,对于考生来说,真的是雅思备考之路上的及时雨啊。

  雅思口语问题:描述过于抽象

  雅思口语话题:和陌生人的有趣谈话。

  雅思口语原文:I’d like to share a funny story with you. When I was about 10 years old, you know, a boy full of energy and never in a peaceful mind, I was running around freely in a city park.

  这位考生将“一次谈话”和“一个有趣的外国人”两个话题结合起来了,这个本身并没有问题,但是问题感觉干巴巴的,开头段介绍事情发生的时间地点人物。但是时间介绍上(when I was about 10 years old)太过于抽象,所以我加上了一句 it took place。并在I was running…前面加上one day来合理细化时间。you know, a boy full of energy and never in a peaceful mind此句显得多余,可以删去。

  雅思口语批改:I’d like to share a funny story with you. It took place when I was about 10 years old. One day as I was jogging in a city park,

  雅思口语问题:语序逻辑问题

  雅思口语原文:Suddenly on the corner ,I nearly bumped into a middle-aged man who is a medium-built foreigner around 5.3 feet, a little fat but with sparkling eyes which is so beautiful and attractive that I couldn’t help looking so much. I stopped and said sorry to him sincerely. Fortunately He was not irritable and said it’s ok.

  这段介绍事情的起因。因为在跑步的过程中遇到了外国人,顺便对其外貌进行了描述。很明显在几乎要撞上对方的时候是来不及看清对方长相的,所以此处直接用定语从句描述外貌不恰当。按照真实的事件发展,先撞上人,然后马上道歉,在对话过程中间看清楚对方的长相。同时,这位同学犯了一个错误,在过去时态里介绍外貌用了现在时。这样会产生误导。

  雅思口语批改:One day as I was running around freely in a city park,I nearly bumped right into a man at a corner. Not until he apologized in poor Chinese did I realize he was a foreigner! To tell you the truth the guy was actually good-looking. He was about 5.3 feet tall, a little fat but blue eyes sparkled with charisma, which really appealed to me.

  雅思口语问题:冗余赘述,逻辑连接词乱用

  雅思口语原文:At the moment I found that there were about seven dogs frolicking around him, they seemed to be cute corgis then I asked him what was he doing with them?

  接着注意到了外国人身边有七条柯基犬,(found改为noticed更为准确,seemed to be也显多余,可以直接删除),于是有了这段对话。

  此处要注意逻辑关系,看到小狗后才想起问他在干嘛,是因果关系,所以then改为so。宾语从句需要使用陈述句语序,后面也无需加问号

  雅思口语批改:At the moment I noticed that there were about seven corgi puppies frolicking around him. So I asked him what he was doing.


汇总雅思口语批改问题


  雅思口语问题:指代不明

  He responded that he was just racing with his small pets and the first one would be given the name Gabriel the same as his and the rest would be named from number one to six.

  first one 指代不明,改成winner of the game会明确很多。

  雅思口语批改:He responded that he was just racing with his puppies and the winner of the game would be named Gabriel -- just the same as his and the rest would be named from one to six.

  雅思口语问题:中式表达

  That was so funny I never heard before. I said how did he come up with this idea? He said he had no idea but it occurred to him suddenly when he saw children running around. Oh maybe I made some contributions for him. Finally, I said goodbye to him and wished him a good ending.

  这一段用于描述自己的反应和感受,但是表达过于中式。第一句话是个病句,可以更改成 It was so funny that I was cracked up. 后面进一步加强,I even started to wonder how he came up with the idea. 然后外国人解释,he told me he had a tough time figuring out how to name the dogs till he saw some kids running around in this park one day.

  雅思口语批改:It was so funny that I was cracked up. A bit confused, the foreigner, however, went on to explain that he had a tough time figuring out how to name the dogs till he saw some kids running around in this park one day. I have to say it was a brilliant yet quite novel idea. Don’t you think so?  对于雅思考生而言,听力无疑是一大难点。原因在于考生在备考中都接受的是正规的语音语调的积累和背诵,对于听力口音这个问题,很多考生都是在考试的时候才有所察觉。今天启德考培小编就为大家整理分析关于雅思听力口语的归纳和总结。希望能帮助到大家。

  说到雅思听力考试,很多考生都担心语音的问题。因为雅思听力的场景设置都是来自不同区域的英语国家。或多或少都有口音问题。加上我们考生在备考中都接受的是正规的语音语调的积累和背诵。对于那些口音带来的差异往往容易失分。同时我们也需要认清雅思听力的口音问题是官方刻意的。因为可以提高听力考试的难度,我们会更加不容易从千奇百怪的口音中甄选出想要的答案,那我们该怎样面对这样的情况呢?

  对于雅思听力口音的问题,其实很多时候都有其特定的特点。要抱着开放的心态去接受这个事,不能一味避免这方面的学习。而且我们需要明确的是口音问题并不会让你听不懂不理解的程度。每种口音都有其特点,比如:印度式英语 t 和 d, k 和 g,p 和 b 音不分。想要适应这些国家的口音,考生可以平常多了解相关的美剧、电影,或者关于印度方面的电影电视剧,并且多听一些剑桥雅思当中出现的相关音频,就能让我们消除对这几种国际口音的抵触感了。

  还有各位雅思考生关心的美式口音的问题。其实从全局分析,英式英语的Received Pronunciation比美音更加收敛,语音音调也四平八稳,起伏较小;美式英语发音方式会更加的自然轻松,音调上下起伏较大。从发音上看,英音和美音在字母r是否卷舌以及单词中的元音口型大小都是有明显的区别的:

  1、英音中,大部分带有r的单词都不会发出卷舌音,但是在美音中,除了Mrs.这个词以外,所有带r的字母组合都要卷舌。

  2、英音中正常发/ɒ/ 的字母o在美音当中会发偏/a:/的音,比如god, box, shop等,而英音中正常发/a:/的字母a在美音当中会发偏/æ/的音,比如class, ask, advance等。

  另外,同时也想说明一下关于澳大利亚的英语口音问题。澳大利亚作为英联邦成员,语音语调方面也是跟英音最接近的。但是还是有些不同,在澳洲音中/ei/和/e/这两个音节会跟英音有明显的不同:/ei/ 这个音会变为 /ai/,例如place会读为/plais/,mate会读为/mait/;而/e/这个音会变为/i/,比如 remember会读为 /ri’mimb/。

  最后谈一下关于我们最喜欢抱怨的印度的语音语调问题,虽然印度也是作为英联邦成员,但是它们的发音却是十分特殊,不像澳音和美式英语一样。通常的特点是语速惊人,没有卷舌音、爆破音和清辅音,所以p发b, t发d, k发g,r发l,另外他们的音调也是比较好认的,I agree -> I aglee,Me too -> Me doo,Car ->Gar,People -> beople,Thank you very much -> Dank you vely much,I am thirty-> I am dirty~

  如果想了解更多相关信息,请关注启德考培上海考培分校平台,免费获取备考提分解决方案,或欢迎 点击这里 进行网络咨询,我们会给您提供专业的服务。最后,预祝大家雅思考试能取得理想的成绩。

关于我们

关于我们

启德文化

服务协议

联系我们

网站地图

雅思

雅思考试

雅思报名

备考规划

雅思培训

机经下载

托福

托福考试

托福报名

备考规划

培训课程

机经下载

身边的考培
暑假班
关闭
抢占秋季班优惠 不,我不爱学习
点击预约报名展 放弃出国梦想
我要领书 不感兴趣
残忍离开
免费电话咨询

手机请直接输入:如1860086xxxx

座机前加区号:如01059992xxxx

请输入您的电话号码,点击"致电最近校区",稍后您将接到我们的电话,该通话对您完全免费,请放心接听!