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解析社会类雅思写作参考
资讯 · 2017-11-13 13:44:50
虽然雅思写作中大作文要求是250字,但据以往优秀作文的字数判断,最好写到280字左右。在时间和思路都允许的情况下,最好达到以上的要求。

  雅思写作中,大作文占雅思写作总分的2/3左右,字数要求是250字。特别注意,题目要求分析双方观点再给出自己的观点。在思路方面,可以想一想除了救济金之外,还有很多不同形式的援助,例如教育、医疗等等。范文从这个角度切入,支持发达国家帮助相对贫困国家。下面启德考培小编对社会类的作文给出一些参考,希望能帮助到考生。


解析社会类雅思写作参考


  ome people argue that countries should have a moral obligation to help each other; on the other hand, some people argue that a large amount of aid money does not reach the poor of the world. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

  有人认为国家之间应该有相互帮助的道义责任。另一方面,有人认为大笔的善款没有到达世界上穷人的手中。讨论这两种观点并给出自己的观点。

  Sample answer:

  It is noticeable that globalization has made countries closely connected and developed nations tend to give international aid to the more impoverished ones. Generally, I think that helping each other among countries is right and the aid can take various forms besides capital.

  Those who claim aid money cannot reach the global poor mainly because the poorest nations are particularly badly governed, where corruption, official incompetence and failure to protect fundamental property rights are incapable of producing the most desirable effect of receiving aid money. It can be confirmed with the example of Africa. Every year Africa receives an enormous number of financial help from rich countries, but it is not able to make economy in Africa prosperous. Nevertheless, the point here is not that we are supposed to be skeptical of the notion of international aid itself but that the way we implement it needs to be carefully designed and different kinds of foreign assistance should be adopted accordingly.

  The significance of this practice is prone to be noted. Firstly, with the support of educational resources form developed countries, an increasing number of schools have been set up in those less developed areas, so citizens there have more accesses to education, which actually promotes the development of those places in the long run Besides, with foreign investment, a growing number of employment opportunities are offered in less developed places, which contributes to more income and greater social stability for the local. Another perceived advantage is that as a result of medical donations, certain popular diseases have been controlled or eradicated in many poor nations.

  In conclusion. I am in favor of the idea that richer places have a moral responsibility to help poor ones, which can promote establishing a harmonious world and encourage various countries to develop their societies together with the help of different types of international aid.

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  虽然雅思大作文要求是250字,但据以往优秀作文的字数判断,最好写到280字左右。在时间和思路都允许的情况下,最好达到以上的要求。如果想了解更多关于雅思写作如何提升及相关信息,请关注启德考培南京分校平台,免费获取备考提分解决方案,或欢迎 点击这里 进行网络咨询,我们会给您提供专业的服务。最后,预祝大家雅思考试能取得理想的成绩。

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