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2019年3月23日雅思小作文范文

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2019年0323写作(小作文)题目以及范文

The diagram shows the process of canning fresh fruit. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features. Make comparisons where relevant.

雅思小作文范文-启德考培 

The flow chart shows the canning process for pears. There are fourteen stages in the procedure from when the fresh produce is picked to when the canned pears are distributed. 

After the fruit is picked by hand it is transported to the cannery. In the cannery facility, it is first washed, then checked for quality to ensure that it is of a suitable quality. The selected fruit is stored in cold storage until it is ready to be canned.

In the next part of the process the fruit is weighed and given a grade. Next it is peeled, cored and sliced. Now the slices are ready to be put into cans, which are then sealed. The canned fruit is cooked and at this stage the cans are also sterilized. After cooking and sterilizing, the cans are labelled and the canned fruit is stored before being dispatched to distributors and other places to be sold.

                                                                                                         By Dr Rob Burton

 

范文解析:

这是一篇典型的流程图(flow chart)小作文,在写这种类型的小作文的时候,考生应注意,不能包含的描述为:数字,对比以及趋势的描述。写这类文章时,可以描述的是:一共有几个步骤,流程从哪里开始从哪里结束以及对于每一个步骤的描述。如本文,作者有详有略的描述了每一个步骤,且把每个步骤用顺序连接词连接起来。使用顺序连接词可以帮助考生整理思路,是每一个步骤的描述都更加清晰,如文章中:’After the fruit is picked’, ‘In the next part of the process…’, ‘After cooking and sterilizing’等。其次,考生们可以使用被动语态的形式来描述流程,比如,在第一个和第二个步骤,作者的描述为:After the fruit is picked by hand, it is transported to the cannery. 这种描述方法更加地道。同时,关于流程图写作方法在启德2018雅思标准化教材第五课中有详细的讲解,如果大家想学习更多关于雅思写作的内容,欢迎大家来启德上课。

 


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