写作部分


话题类型: 教育类
题目译文:有些父母需要花时间给孩子读故事或者讲故事,而有些人认为孩子可以通过资书籍、电视和网络等各种资源自己阅读。讨论双方观点并给出自己的观点。
分析:2010-11-4亚太区A类旧题重考。
参考范文:
• Parents reading to children has long been practiced in the history in every culture. The universal aim, of course, is to help children with their early education. Nowadays, the advancement of technologies enables children to get access to information not only from books, but also from Internet and other media. Is it right for parents to read to their children or should children spend more time to search for answer themselves on the Internet? I’m now going to discuss both views and provide my opinion on it.
• Some educators believe that children should be guided by parents when reading since they have low level of vocabulary and understanding ability. Children are likely to encounter many unfamiliar words and concepts in their reading, and it is the responsibility of parents to explain to children and support them in their learning progress. For instance, a 5-year-old child may come across many words that he has never seen before when the first time he reads Harry Potter. Thus by being a listener, they can enhance their understanding of the story line. Moreover, children need to be aware of the danger of being exposed to any inappropriate books. Sadly, as we all are aware, not all books are great for children. For example, some books contain strong contents of adult material, such as pornography and violent concepts, which are very ill advised for children to read.
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• On the other hand, many other people believe the youths should read various resources themselves. This is firstly because children will learn more and understand knowledge on a deeper level if they are able to find the answers for themselves. For example, when they encounter words which they have not seen before, but by researching it online, they can find the answers for themselves, so they do not need to ask parents for help. Often, this can help children to remember the word in a longer period comparing simply being told the answer. Additionally, reading the material online can encourage children to develop independent thinking skill. Parents’ answers are not always right, and they cannot always be there to respond when children are stuck. Therefore, it is important for children to develop the skills to search for answers themselves when they are unsure. This is especially the case when they go to a university, where it runs on independent learning. This is why children should early on, being encouraged to find useful resources themselves and not relies on their parents for it.
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• In my view, parents have paramount importance in children's education, and this can often be achieved by simple means such as reading to or being together with children. However, at the same time, parents should also be cautious not to do this excessively as it can destroy children's independent learning. Therefore, efforts should also be made to encourage them to find answers for themselves. That means to achieve a successful education, a balanced approach of both methods should be employed.
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◆ 注:红色部分的表达是体现写作评分中的CC(Coherence & Cohesion)得分的衔接词/词组。
◆ 精选词汇:
Universal-共同的
Advancement-发展
Enhance-增强
Neglected-被忽略的
Aggression-粗暴的
Algebra-代数
Paramount-十分重要的
Excessively-多余的
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