托福写作的时候大家是不是经常会出现病句，可能你在写的时候根本就没有发现，为了大家在托福写作的时候病句会少出现，今天启德考培小编就给大家说说托福写作的一些病句分析。

　　1、 破碎句

　　所谓破碎句，就是句子不完整，通常是没有谓语(或者说谓语是动词的非谓语形式，如分词)，或者是从句单独成句。

　　破碎句：She singing alone. (无谓语，singing是现在分词)

　　正确句：She is singing alone.

　　破碎句：He did not come. Because he was sick. (从句单独成句)

　　正确句：He did not come because he was sick.

　　2、接连句

　　所谓接连据，就是两个句子直接连在一起，既未使用连词，也未使用正确的标点符号。

　　接连句: Professionals such as lawyers or accountants usually work longer hours than factory workers they have greater freedom in planning their time.

　　正确句一: Professionals such as lawyers or accountants usually work longer hours than factory workers. However, they have greater freedom in planning their time.

　　正确句二: Professionals such as lawyers or accountants usually work longer hours than factory workers; however, they have greater freedom in planning their time.

　　3、句子连接不正确

　　所谓句子连接不正确，就是两个独立的句子之间以逗号连接，这是不合英语语法的。正确的做法是以连词、分号、冒号、句号等连接两个句子。

　　不正确句: Breaking chalk into two pieces is a physical change, there is no change in the composition of the chalk.

　　正确句： Breaking chalk into two pieces is a physical change, so there is no change in the composition of the chalk.

　　下面启德考培小编在给大家看看托福写作的高分表达：

　　正常句: Luck only works in extreme cases.

　　倒装句：Only in extreme cases does luck work.(否定词位于句首的倒装。)

　　正常句：The internet provides people access to the latest information.

　　强调句:It is the internet that provides people access to the latest information. (强调the internet)

　　正常句:The environment has been deteriorating severely along with the development of industry.

　　上述的这些就是今天小编给大家分析的几个病句，大家看看你在托福写作的时候是不是也犯过类似的错误呢?其实犯错误不可怕，怕的是你不愿意改正，所以启德考培小编提醒大家一定要好好改正。

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