托福写作部分分数不高，原因有很多种但是最主要的一点是考生在答题时候常会书写一些病句，这会让分数大打折扣。今天启德考培小编就为大家整理了有关托福培训写作中修改病句的一些小技巧。

　　1. I am not good at maths, but English

　　改进: I am good not at mathematics but at English/ My strength is not mathematics but English.

　　2. Who is the proper person to make up his minds about children’s leisure time?

　　改进: Who is the proper person to plan children’s leisure time?

　　3.It is children who clear about their interests.

　　改进: It is children who are clear about their own interests.

　　4. I agree the latter idea.(漏掉介词是大家在托福写作中低分的常见病句。)

　　改进: I agree with the latter idea.

　　5. Many people dissatisfy with the status quo.

　　改进: Many people are dissatisfied with the status quo.

　　6. So I feel breathe more comfortably now.

　　改进: So I feel more comfortable now when I breathe.

　　7. People should learn knowledge no matter how old they are.(语义重复也是大家在托福写作中导致低分的主要原因)

　　改进：People should learn no matter how old they are/ People are never too old to learn.

　　8. No one knows all the things.

　　改进: No one knows everything.

　　9. I want to live in a quiet place to admire peaceful life.

　　改进: I want to live in a quiet place to enjoy peaceful life.

　　10. Each form of shavings friends has its advantages.

　　改进: Each way of choosing friends has its advantages.

　　11. I was admitted to a Key University for which few dared to sign up.

　　改进: I was admitted to a Key University to which few dared to apply.

　　12. Luckily, he recognized an American professor.

　　改进: Luckily, he knew an American professor.

　　13. They will learn the bad habits.

　　改进: They will develop bad habits.

　　14. In this continued process, people make progress.

　　改进: In this cycle, people make progress.

　　15. Lastly, higher education is equal to higher salary.

　　改进: Lastly, higher education means higher salary.

　　16. By making friends who are different from ourselves, we can make up for deficiency.

　　改进: By making friends who are different from ourselves, we can make up for our shortcomings.

　　17. A wrong decision will bring even worse fact.

　　改进: A wrong decision will bring even worse result.

　　18. You spend all your life to fulfill your willing.

　　改进: You devote all your life to the fulfillment of your dream.

　　19. Children should be taught disciplines in groups to avoid unnecessary lost.

　　改进: Children should be taught discipline in groups to avoid unnecessary loss.

　　20. I felt alone.

　　21. Eating outside has the most advantage that we can go at any time when we finish eating without doing any washing.

　　改进: The best part of eating out is that we can leave everything behind after meal.

　　22. Smoking can help you relax your mind.

　　改进: Cigarettes can help you relax.

　　23. What’s about nonsmokers?

　　改进: What about nonsmokers?

　　24. Why not to be a non-smoker?

　　改进: Why not be a non-smoker?

　　25. Everyone will have many friends in his life.

　　改进: Everyone has friends in his life.

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