相信大多数考鸭在练习大作文时都有一种非常煎熬、难受的心情:啊!天呐!为什么别人能思如泉涌,而我却已经黔驴技穷了呢?我该写什么呢?写完了主题句以后就词穷了呀!
的确,这是普遍存在的现象。考鸭们都较能容易的想到主题句,但是轮到后面需要继续拓展论证的部分就尴尬地陷入囧地。正因为如此,本文将介绍两种比较通俗易懂、容易上手的拓展思路方法给各位考鸭们。敲黑板~
简单例子:
Some books and movies have negative effects on children.
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第一个方法:名词具象化
这个例子中的这句话就是主题句,【books and movies】是名词,我们在拓展论证时就可以把它们具象化。比如,考鸭们可以这样写:
For example, obscene books and violent movies are very dangerous to children.
看到了吗?【obscene books and violent movies】就是具体说明了。
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第二个方法:动词丰富化
还是使用这个例子,主题句中的动词是have,后面跟了宾语negative effects,表示有负面影响,如何丰富它的讲法呢?譬如:毒害他们的思想、扭曲他们的价值观、甚至误导他们。我们再用一个更高大上的句式去做拓展论证:
A specific example can be reflected in the fact that pornographic and violent movies or books, to a large extent, poison young minds, twist their values and even lead them astray.
考鸭们,这样写是不是内容就更为丰富了呢?!首先,至少我们在考场中不至于无话可写,其次,在语言表达上也会更加多元化。
接下来,将提供一个较难例子,大家可以尝试找下句中的名词和动词,在看参考示范之前先自己思考下如果名词具象化,动词丰富化:
举栗子:
The developments in information technology (IT) have dramatically changed people’s life.
建议大家先自己思考下,然后动笔练习下,然后再参照我提供的两个思路拓展示范:▶拓展论证示范1:
A convincing example can be found in the fact that the Internet has reshaped people’s consumption patterns, reformed the ways of social interaction, and even reconstructed our cultures and mindsets.
▶拓展论证示范2:
A persuasive example can be reflected in the fact that the Internet has completely boosted the efficiency and time-flexibility of an individual’s working and studying, unprecedentedly changed people’s ways of socialization, and even exerted a subtle but far-reaching impact on the whole society’s languages and cultures.
同学们都学会了吗~接下来码大作文的时候,是不是就多了很多拓宽脑洞的思路了呢~期待大家都能学有所得,成功分手呢~
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