写作部分

　　Task 1 The table shows the percentage of men and women working in differentsectors.

　　范文：

　　The table of figures compares the data of males and females who workedin diverse industries in the years of 1990, 2000 and 2010.

　　As can be seen, generally, of note is the factthat the figure for men who worked in health area maintained fairly stable. Likewise, the same steady trend could be seen in thefemales working in retail and shops, as well as the tourism during these years.

　　In 1990, more males were engaged in retailing and shops, also in manufacturing,whereas females were morelikely to work in the field of health and tourism. To be specific, sharing 23%and 25% respectively at the beginning, the rates of men in both these twoindustries went through a decline, but it should be notable that the proportionof manufacturing reduced more significantly. On the contrary, that of men employed in tourism rose steadily, from 7% to 20%, thebiggest of these four areas in 2010.

　　As for women, there was a general decrease in the people whoworked in the health and manufacturing industry. Especially the manufacturing,just 9% women took this job in 2010. In stark contrast, tourism was quite popular among the females, roughly at 25% in 2010.

　　Obviously, the data indicate that tourism was an attractiveindustry for men and women in 2010.

　　Task 2

　　话题类型：观点类;健康类

　　题目译文：有人认为政府应该做更多事情来使得公民拥有良好的饮食习惯，然而有些人认为这是个人的责任，对自己的健康负责。讨论双方给出你的意见。

　　题目分析：类似2015年7月19日的雅思旧题

　　Some people believe that the government have the duty to ensure itscitizens have a healthy diet，while others believe that it is individuals'responsibility to care for their diet and health. Discuss both sides and giveyour opinion.

　　文章结构：

　　四段式结构

　　第1段：介绍话题内容，提出本文的打算。

　　第2段：论证段第1段，一方面，不可否认政府在管理方面有很重要的宣传和引导作用。

　　第3段：论证段第2段，另一方面从个人角度提出，身体健康是自己的，个人应该树立健康的饮食习惯。

　　第4段：总结段，政府的确有宣传的作用，但健康的生活应更多应该靠个人。

　　参考范文：

　　Currently,diet-related disease is the biggestkiller in the United States and England today, which has also becomea catastrophe sweeping the world. Whether the governmentor the individuals should shoulder the responsibility to care for the diet and health has sparked a heated discussion. Inthis essay, before rendering my notions, I will explore the issue from diverseperspectives.

　　On the one hand, no one would deny the fact that the government has the obligation to publicizethe importance of having a healthy diet. It is quitecommon to see that a great number of young people are crazy aboutfast food or junk food. Also, it is claimed by the America government report that obesity problemcosts 10 percent of the healthcare bills in the yearly budget. Thus, the government should offer guidance to the citizens, especially theyoung generations so as to ensure their well-being. Future diet plan and lifestyle interventionprogrammes should emphasize increasing fresh vegetables and fruits inaddition to reducing television watching and othersedentarybehaviours.

　　On the other hand, any doctor or specialist will tell us the truth that it is the individuals’ tiny behavior that can improve our physical condition. Countries, like England,Australia, India and China, have massive problems of obesity and bad health. Findingsshow that individuals with higher levels of having a balanced diet and eating freshvegetables had a lower risk of getting illness. Every hour a day spent workingout strengthens our blood flow and the functionof each part of body. In addition to increasingphysical activity, we should know that establishing a long-term lifestyle forourselves is of great importance for the physical health.

　　To conclude, the government is the supervisor to publicize the value of having agood diet, however, the most vital part is that we should build up aprimary goal for ourselves.

　　u 注：红色部分的表达是体现写作评分中的CC(Coherence & Cohesion)得分的衔接词组。

　　重要写作词汇词组学习：

　　diet-related disease 饮食相关的疾病

　　catastrophe灾难

　　shoulder the responsibility承担责任

　　junk food垃圾食物

　　yearly budget年度预算

　　lifestyle intervention生活习惯的干预

　　sedentary behaviours久坐的行为

　　blood flow血液流动

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