【启德考培】雅思大作文超级容易翻车的坑，90%以上的同学都会出错。最要命的是，很多同学上来第一步就错了。 

一、审题的坑

雅思考试中对于Task Response 要求算是比较高的，如果第一步审题就错了，基本上就和6分say goodbye了。 举个例子：The government should pay for the course fees for students because our society benefit from it. To what extent do you agree or disagree?这个题目乍看上去好像说的是：政府是否应当为学生付学费。 所以几乎所有同学可能都会有这样一个观点：因为很多学生家庭贫困，所以政府应当帮助他们负担学费~~但是有一点请大家注意啦，题目中给出了非常强烈的因果关系：

因为—所以

因为：our society benefit from it

所以：The government should pay for the course fees for students

题目要求大家需要按照“因为所以”这个逻辑去论证。 比如：1. 大学教育可以让我们社会拥有更多有竞争力的人才，提升国家竞争优势（competitive advantage）2. 大学教育可以社会拥有更多的有技能人才（skillful persons）这些人可以提升社会的整体效率（overall productivity）因此最终是社会受益，所以政府应当负担学费。 

而今天如果题目变成这个样子：The government should pay for the course fees for students because our society benefit from it. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 这个观点：很多学生家庭贫困，所以政府应当帮助他们负担学费......就完全适用了。 

二、论证太水

比如这个题目：Today computers can be seen everywhere in our life. It brings many advantages to our life. To what extent do you agree or disagree?有些同学在看到题目后，提出的论点非常general，比如 Computers have changed our life greatly.  change life greatly 就是一个非常空洞的论点。 在论点里面，最好不要用一些特别general的词汇，比如good，bad，changed greatly...这些比较空洞的词汇。可以把这些空洞的词汇具体化，比如Served as a medium of communication, computers can be extremely convenient for users to have access (触及到）to their teachers，relatives or clients. 

三、强行下结论

很多同学在写雅思作文的时候，经常会出现强行下观点的情况，这个在考生作文中出现的频率几乎是百分百。比如：Extracurricular activities should be encouraged at schools and children will improve their confidence. Therefore, taking part in after-school activities is necessary. 

这个论证会让考官读起来头上飘过无数问号。为什么参加课外活动可以增强孩子的自信呢？这里面缺少了最核心关键的论证。 所以这种论证方式的文章就属于强行下结论，逻辑链不完整。我们可以稍微修改一下：

Extracurricular activities should be encouraged at schools and children will improve their confidence. In their extracurricular activities, students will learn how to work hard, overcome difficulties, and accomplish their goals. This establishes a strong foundation and instills confidence to help them advance in the future. (这个部分都是在增加逻辑完整性，不让论证缺失）Therefore....